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Week Beginning 25th January 2021

 

Monday the 25th of January 2021

 

LO: To write the first 2 sections of our write

Thank you for your plans. You have organised your research well and have used excellent vocabulary like vicious, strongest and bitten. I can't wait to see what you do today!

Y2 Shark Write 24.1.21

Great start folks!

 

 

Tuesday the 26th of January 2021

 

Lo: To write the 'What do they eat?' and 'What is their behaviour?' section

Hi there! Today you will be writing the next two sections of your shark write. Please watch the video then have a go! Remember to upload your work to the Google form below. 

Y2 Shark write next two sections

 

Wednesday the 27th of January 2021

 

LO: To write the "What do they look like?" section

 

You're nearly there Y2s! Today you will be writing the last section of your information text. Please watch the following video to find out more, then get started. 

Y2 shark next section

We're loving your shark writes so far! Brilliant use of vocabulary and openers

 

Thursday the 28th of January 2021

 

Lo: To Edit and Improve your text

More brilliant pieces of writing.... we are blown away by the quality and fantastic use of technical vocabulary... you are surely shark experts by now!

Please have a watch of the video then upload your edited work here

Y2 shark editing

Use this to help check your spelling. Remember you can also use Google with a grown up's help and check for those tricky homophones!

Good suffixes to use: deadliest, scariest, speediest larger, faster, wonderful, powerful

Tremendous work Y2s. We can see excellent proof reading and editing skills.

 

Friday the 29th of January 2021

 

LO: To write my final draft

Y2 final write Friday

Example layout

This is a useful visual to show the correct heights of the letters.

Superb final drafts. Please keep them coming y2s!

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