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- Week beginning 8th February 2021
Week beginning 8th February 2021
Monday
This week we will be exploring what astronauts wear in space. Then we will be writing instructions and reading them out so the astronauts at the International Space Station know how to get ready.
Y1 Writing Monday Astronaut
How Astronauts Put on Space Suits
A 10 minute video with an expert showing how the space suit works. Wait till you see what the astronauts have to put on first. There's a lot of talking in this but watch as much as you can. We probably won't be having experts talking to us this year so this will do instead!
A Fast Forward version of astronauts putting on their space suits
Watch NASA astronauts Andrew Morgan and Christina Koch put on their spacesuits prior to a spacewalk on Oct. 6, 2019. -- Spacewalk Highlights: https://www.sp...
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Great labelling. Sorry it printed small
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Super neat work. Weel done
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I love the double lines. Great work
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Fantastic job today.
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That looks delicious
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Great detailed work. Wow. (also ⭐ for the drawing)
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Very detailed work. Well done
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Amazing writing. Wow, (and another ⭐ for the drawing)
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Wow, Can you remember all the parts to label (and sorry it printed small)
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Great labelling
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I love how you used fred to sound out tricky words. Well Done
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I like how many parts you labelled.
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Great work today. (⭐ for picture)
Tuesday - Hold a Sentence
When we do Talk for Writing, the talking, drawing and acting is just as important as the writing. Have a go, join in and have fun!
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Well done. You remembered all of the sentence.
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Wonderful memory. Well done. Be careful with the b and d.
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Good writing. Don't worry if you make mistakes. You don't need to rub them out. Just try!
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Ha! You changed the sentence. It still works though, astronaut is hard to spell! Well done
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Fantastic work. Well done on holding that long sentence
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Brilliant writing. Well done. Please try your best with your finger spaces
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You held the sentence. Well done. Remember Sun isn't too tricky. Use Fred!
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Lovely Drawings. Try to use your finger spaces. It makes it easier for me to read
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Wow. What a super effort. You held the sentence. Make sure your d and b are the right way
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Very neat work. Well done! Did you act it out?
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Well done with this writing. You did it. Try your best to stay on the line!
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Lovely stuff. You tried super hard today!
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Lovely drawing and lovely writing. Well done!
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Well done with this. You tried super hard. I
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This is so neat. Well done for a great sentence
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Loads of work here. Wow. You tried so hard and it finished so neat. Well done!
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Amazing work. Very neat on a whiteboard
Wednesday Plan Your Work
Y1 Writing Planning - Astronaut
Today is where we get our ideas down and start to plan, ready for our instructions
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Fantastic ideas today. Well done. Sorry I look a bit scary. Oops
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Great ideas for your plan. Wonderful job today.
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A really detailed plan. Well done!
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Wiggly is a really good word to describe the tether. Well done!
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Wow. Such a detailed plan. I'm really proud of this.
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Great detailed plan. Lovely help from the dinosaur too
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Lovely plan and lovely ideas. Good drawings too!
Thursday First Draft and Edit
Y1 writing astronaut. First draft and mini edit
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Friday - Perform