Today you will be writing the problem in your story. Please watch this video, then read through your work before starting.
-Use my plan
-Use different openers
-Use capital letters and full stops
Tuesday the 19th of January 2021
Good morning Y2s! I hope you are all doing ok. Today is the last day of The Yeti and the Bird write and you have worked so hard. We need to now look at our first draft with fresh eyes and edit and improve it like all the great writers. Please watch this video to see how to go through your work carefully to spot errors and pick out where to make your writing even better!
Wednesday the 20th of January 2021
Please watch this clip from BBC's Deadly 60 on the Great White shark.
Thursday the 21st of January 2021
Today we are going to do some talk for writing. We are going to study an Octopus information text. The more we learn the Octopus text, the easier it will be for us to write our shark information text because we can magpie many ideas and sentence structures.
Please have a look at my example of drawing pictures to help me remember the text. Remember, you do not need to draw a picture for each word and these drawings are to help you so don't worry, this is not an art lesson!
Friday the 22nd of January 2021
Top of the morning to you Y2s! Today we will plan our Great White Shark information text using the research we have done and the knowledge from studying an octopus model write. Please have a look at the lesson video to see how to lay out and fill your V.C.O.P plan (Vocabulary, Conjunctions, Openers, Punctuation).