Friday , January 22nd
Editing a biography
Hi everyone, we are now at the editing stage. To edit means to make our work even better than it is. This is such an important part of the writing process. Even famous authors like J k Rowling will have had an editor check their writing for mistakes.
Tips for editing
Also, please watch the video from the Oak Academy website where another teacher explains the editing process. Good luck!
Thursday, 21st January
Finally, we are getting towards the end of our 1st draft.
The final part is our conclusion, which children always find a little tricky. Do not worry;Mr Rist is here to soothe away your worries!
Top tips for your conclusion:
Read my Conclusion:
To conclude, Jessica Ennis - Hill is regarded as one of the successful British athletes of all time. Even though she has struggled with serious injuries, she has won so many titles and medals in an incredible career.
If you finish the conclusion, can you act it out and draw a story map to go with.
Wednesday, 20th January
Today, I would like you to complete paragraphs 4 and 5 , which are the paragraphs on her Junior career and Professional Career.
Tuesday, 19th January
Writing 2nd and 3rd paragraph of biography
This lesson, you are going to write the paragraph 2 and 3 of your biography. Please watch the videos, magpie some of my ideas and use your plans
Monday, 18th January
Hello wonderful Walkley children! I hope you managed to get out in the snow last week; I was bombing super fast with my sledge down some steep slopes in the heart of Sheffield.
We are now focusing on the Talk for Writing part of our biography. Please click on the video of myself acting out the introduction. Once, you have practiced the actions, can you write your own introduction. Good luck!