Look at this short story from EF. You should be really proud of yourself!
I love the use of ellipsis - cliffhangers endings are my favourite.
Some great - ly openers! I love the way you have used short sentences to build up the tension. Well done HP! Some fantastic vocabulary all the way through HM ! Well done WM, I love your style of writing - I enjoyed reading it so much!
Friday, 5th February
We are now on the last step of our adventure story – the Golden Write. So, put on some relaxing music if you can, sharpen your pencil and prepare to be amazed at your fantastic writing.
Just remember to look at your corrections in the editing stage and include them in your Golden Writing. Good luck everybody!
Hi everyone, we are now at the editing stage. To edit means to make our work even better than it is. This is such an important part of the writing process. Even famous authors like J K Rowling will have had an editor check their writing for mistakes.
Tips for editing
use a different colour pen, so you can clearly see your corrections
read your work out loud ; it is much easier to spot any mistakes
use the checklist below to help you - tick off the checklist as you go along
Please watch the video below, as I talk you through how to edit a text.
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